English novel, A scary night by J
2012-04-27 / 16:57:14
English Novel
A scary night
My name is Amanda, I’m seventeen years old and I live with my parents in California. In my school I’m the most popular girl, I’m a bit of a party girl but I’m studying to. I’m the center of the whole school.
Everyone knows who I am.
Everything started at home when my parents were fighting, they screamed at each other and I was scared. I loved them both so I didn’t want them to fight or getting divorced.
I heard my mother screaming of pain and then a door slammed. I knew that my mother had left our house. My dad would soon came up and apologize to me.
The next day it was a cold silence between my parents. I tried to not care but I was worried. I took my car keys and drove to school. My friends were waiting for me, they are both boys and girls, couples and singles.
We said hi to each other.
My best friend Lily came and we went to our lockers. I took my pen, Rader gum and my English books.
Lily told me about a summer memory and I laughed with her.
“oh look at the new guy.” said Lily suddenly.
I smiled at her. She loved boys.
I looked around and got my first sight of him.
He was standing alone leaning against his locker. He were wearing a dark blue cap that was hiding his eyes with it’s shadow.
He was tall and his body must been in the gym hours after hours to get those muscles.
He had black jeans with a black, tight t-shirt, above it he had a black leather jacket.
Hello.
“hi”
Lily stared at me.
“What did you say?” she was smiling.
“Nothing.” Now I was confused. I’m sure that he had said hello to me. He couldn’t talk to my mind, could he?
I stared at him.
Don’t be rude. I snatched.
The day passed but outside the house I heard angry voices. The tears started burning in my eyes. Not again.
I turned around and started to run to the city. I walked around for hours.
The darkness was falling and I felt like someone was following me.
My heart was beating very fast and hard. I turned around to see if anyone were fallowing me but the street was empty.
I started walk fast to the bus stop.
Suddenly a dark figure cut the way and the only way I could leave was through some alleys to get to another bus stop.
The windows were dark and shut. This was creepy. The only sound I heard was my feet against the street and my own breath.
I saw shadows of three men in the same moment and I realized I had went strait to a blind alley, a wall of stone was rising in front of me.
I started to walk back. Maybe I could pass through them and that they didn’t want me anything.
When I got closer they stopped me.
“ what do you want?” my voice didn’t sound so secure as I wanted it to be.
The guy who seemed to be the leader took his jacket of and started walking against me. I took a few steps back and soon I had the stonewall against my back.
Suddenly I black figure jumped in front of me and landed between me and those guys with his back turned to me.
The leader punched the black guy, but he didn’t even react.
I flicked. My heart was beating so fast and I thouht everyone in that alley could hear it, my eyes flied between every guy.
A cold and scary silence came but then suddenly everything happened very fast.
The black figure started to sound like an animal and an angry one. Then he punched the guy so hard that his tooth flew out.
The two other guys attacked the dark man, but suddenly one of them turned against me. He stared. A huge black wolf with yellow eyes pushed the man in his chest with it’s head. It was meant that he would hit the wall but he didn’t. He hit me.
The last thing I saw was the wolf’s yellow eyes, they were worried.
When I woke up, the sun was shining. I felt the grass underneath me, I could fell the smell of flowers and the forest.
I heard the sound of running water and birds.
I looked around and saw a boy coming towards me from the little creek. He had black jeans and a black t-shirt. His dark hair was blowsy. Both his hair and eyes was so dark that they could compete with a starless midnight.
The skin was light and fresh.
He smiled at me. God that smile!
It was the new guy from school.
Damn he was handsome.
“hi.” his voice sounded like an angels.
“hi.” I felt I was blushing and got angry.
“where am I?”
He was quiet, then he smiled at me, a beautiful, sexy and a bit of dangerous smile. It made me confused . I didn’t know what to do or what to say.
“what’s your name?” I asked after a while of silence.
“Peter.”
It must have been three years since we first met. Peter was some kind of a werewolf, an angel and a vampire.
That night he protected me from those creepy guys, I got through the stonewall and into a fantastic new world, it’s Peter´s world. He was like my guardian angel and that’s why he began in my school. It showed us that we were meant to be together. Now we both living in his world. We had to make a fake death to me in the real world.
I’m sorry, got to go, it’s time to prepare our wedding.
See you later guys.
Några fel men vad fan ta det! tror ni fattar ändå!
My name is Amanda, I’m seventeen years old and I live with my parents in California. In my school I’m the most popular girl, I’m a bit of a party girl but I’m studying to. I’m the center of the whole school.
Everyone knows who I am.
Everything started at home when my parents were fighting, they screamed at each other and I was scared. I loved them both so I didn’t want them to fight or getting divorced.
I heard my mother screaming of pain and then a door slammed. I knew that my mother had left our house. My dad would soon came up and apologize to me.
The next day it was a cold silence between my parents. I tried to not care but I was worried. I took my car keys and drove to school. My friends were waiting for me, they are both boys and girls, couples and singles.
We said hi to each other.
My best friend Lily came and we went to our lockers. I took my pen, Rader gum and my English books.
Lily told me about a summer memory and I laughed with her.
“oh look at the new guy.” said Lily suddenly.
I smiled at her. She loved boys.
I looked around and got my first sight of him.
He was standing alone leaning against his locker. He were wearing a dark blue cap that was hiding his eyes with it’s shadow.
He was tall and his body must been in the gym hours after hours to get those muscles.
He had black jeans with a black, tight t-shirt, above it he had a black leather jacket.
Hello.
“hi”
Lily stared at me.
“What did you say?” she was smiling.
“Nothing.” Now I was confused. I’m sure that he had said hello to me. He couldn’t talk to my mind, could he?
I stared at him.
Don’t be rude. I snatched.
The day passed but outside the house I heard angry voices. The tears started burning in my eyes. Not again.
I turned around and started to run to the city. I walked around for hours.
The darkness was falling and I felt like someone was following me.
My heart was beating very fast and hard. I turned around to see if anyone were fallowing me but the street was empty.
I started walk fast to the bus stop.
Suddenly a dark figure cut the way and the only way I could leave was through some alleys to get to another bus stop.
The windows were dark and shut. This was creepy. The only sound I heard was my feet against the street and my own breath.
I saw shadows of three men in the same moment and I realized I had went strait to a blind alley, a wall of stone was rising in front of me.
I started to walk back. Maybe I could pass through them and that they didn’t want me anything.
When I got closer they stopped me.
“ what do you want?” my voice didn’t sound so secure as I wanted it to be.
The guy who seemed to be the leader took his jacket of and started walking against me. I took a few steps back and soon I had the stonewall against my back.
Suddenly I black figure jumped in front of me and landed between me and those guys with his back turned to me.
The leader punched the black guy, but he didn’t even react.
I flicked. My heart was beating so fast and I thouht everyone in that alley could hear it, my eyes flied between every guy.
A cold and scary silence came but then suddenly everything happened very fast.
The black figure started to sound like an animal and an angry one. Then he punched the guy so hard that his tooth flew out.
The two other guys attacked the dark man, but suddenly one of them turned against me. He stared. A huge black wolf with yellow eyes pushed the man in his chest with it’s head. It was meant that he would hit the wall but he didn’t. He hit me.
The last thing I saw was the wolf’s yellow eyes, they were worried.
When I woke up, the sun was shining. I felt the grass underneath me, I could fell the smell of flowers and the forest.
I heard the sound of running water and birds.
I looked around and saw a boy coming towards me from the little creek. He had black jeans and a black t-shirt. His dark hair was blowsy. Both his hair and eyes was so dark that they could compete with a starless midnight.
The skin was light and fresh.
He smiled at me. God that smile!
It was the new guy from school.
Damn he was handsome.
“hi.” his voice sounded like an angels.
“hi.” I felt I was blushing and got angry.
“where am I?”
He was quiet, then he smiled at me, a beautiful, sexy and a bit of dangerous smile. It made me confused . I didn’t know what to do or what to say.
“what’s your name?” I asked after a while of silence.
“Peter.”
It must have been three years since we first met. Peter was some kind of a werewolf, an angel and a vampire.
That night he protected me from those creepy guys, I got through the stonewall and into a fantastic new world, it’s Peter´s world. He was like my guardian angel and that’s why he began in my school. It showed us that we were meant to be together. Now we both living in his world. We had to make a fake death to me in the real world.
I’m sorry, got to go, it’s time to prepare our wedding.
See you later guys.
/boktjejernamedstil
Kommentarer!
s säger:
Jag älskar den här, blanding av vampyr, varulv och ängel: kan det bli bättre?!?!
Visst några småfel, men det var ingenting stort.
Lite kort, vilket är konstigt med tanke du att DU är författaren, men det är lugnt jag älskaaaaaar den<3<3<3
(jag älskar din nya landet novell också, den var sorglig men bra!! älskar slutet på den, bara osar styrka om den)
